Update: So, that ended up being way too difficult of a topic to write about, so Yin changed the new American Dream to be better overall health. I thought it was an interesting subject as well, so I wrote this outline which I would have used, though she didn't use it:
Intro:
While the “American Dream” has made
America the wealthiest country in the world, the failings of American culture
are all over the news – the recent killings in Connecticut, before that a
murder spree in a Colorado theater, before that the trial of a woman killing
her infant child in Colorado, etc. Another battle being played out on the news for
the last four years has been the struggle over health care. There are many
forms of health, and America is failing at most of them. America is addicted to
sweet, salty, fatty junk food; doesn’t get enough exercise; depressed and
over-worked; struggles with drug abuse – legal and illegal; is desensitized to sex
and violence; and does a poor job getting psychological help to those who need
it. These are signs of a deeper problem than a lack of access to care, it is a
sign of complete societal failing. If America could have one new dream, it
should be to have a truly healthier society.
Outline
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Intro – sequence of items in intro serve as
outline for the rest of the paper
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Paragraph 1 – Address stressful American
Lifestyle
o
Work too many hours per day
o
Leads to poor diet and no time for exercise
o
Dependence on caffeine also decreases quality of
sleep
o
All of this is the price we pay to survive, most
of us paycheck to paycheck, and that is a leading cause of depression (this
could be its own paragraph)
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Paragraph 2 – Drugs
o
America is over medicated
o
Pharmaceutical industry has paid to keep us that
way
o
America self-medicates with drugs and alcohol,
and is encouraged to do so socially
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Paragraph 3 – Desensitivity
o
American media is flooded with sex and violence
– in the news, movies, video games, music, etc.
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While individuals may not necessarily emulate
what they see, there is a cultural shift, and where the extremities lie shifts
as well
o
Desensitivity to adultery, divorce, bad
parenting, and other family breakers
·
Conclusion – Most of these issues cannot be
legislated, and even if they could, prohibiting some activities or requiring
others will not make those things happen. Government cannot solve these
problems, it is up to individuals to strive for a higher standard than the old,
monetary American Dream. The old American dream didn’t make us all wealthy, but
it did make America the richest country in the world; likewise, the new American
dream won’t make us all healthy in all the ways described, but if we put our
minds to it, we could become the healthiest country in the world.
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